Your Lips.

when I draw your lips
I can't help but
drag my fingers over them
so gently
I can feel how soft they are

Reviews

[Amy Vaughn]

Ah, so sweet. It made me smile.

[MandaBear]

Short, simple, and beautiful

Very beautiful! You wrote this with a lot passion!
I like the picture to haha, of the piercing! It kind of killed the “smooth”, “gentle” part though.
Lovely write.

[Ben Taylor]

Short, simple, and beautiful.
I like the lack of punctuation; it actually adds to the piece quite a bit.

[Lily Mae]

I love this..soft and sweet with some deep passion behind it all.. Great write..xx

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very calming write.