Wake-Up Call

Another one of the old songs, couple of years old at this point.

Hey Everybody in the big city.
Hey Everybody just hold your pity.
Hey Everybody just leaves us alone and I'll leave you alone and I'll leave you alone.
Hey I never call me and I never pick up the phone, I never pick up the phone.
 

Well,
Pick up, pick up, pick up the phone.
Answer.
Pick up, pick up, pick up the phone.
It's your wake up call.
 

It's a splash of cold water
Like that girl in the halter,
While you're in that turtleneck.

 

Its the snow on the ground,
While the kids splash around,

In your inground pool.

 

Its that feeling you get
While his hands on her neck
And your close enough to smell his cologne.

And it makes me, want him.

The third wheel's single
And I feel no need to mingle
Because my sights are on him.

Locked and Loaded, ready to go.
One thing missing--
Attraction.

I'm clueless you joker
In this game of poker,
Or is it russian roulette?
But we're playing,
We're playing,
With rules I just dont get.
And I need to know--
Are you in?

Do you fold?
Will you hold

me?
Through the night?
Clear or Cloudy?

But these rhyming words
won't get heard
through my thick skin.
So I need to crack open,
And i need to reach out,

And I need to let you in.

I need to let you in.
I need to let you in.

Author's Note

Remember: This is some of my first stuff so its very rough lol.

Reviews

[Star-Runner]

This is a well written write and you are very talented. I like your writes so far i will have to read some more of them.

[J.P.O.et]

Nice ideas and like the way you express
The underlining was interesting and different, will
have to check more
J.P.O.et

[No One Important]

I have sooo been that third wheel for the longest time and I totally relate to this poem...It is going in my favorites...

[thecoolone52]

ohhhh trying to steal someones b.f or husband or something???? Hahaha you know this poem it was ok for me i think you write a little better then that.... the rhyme sceme was kind of forced a little.... i mean the russian part was good and you had orginal takes on things but it was just ok for me.....