A Little About Me

I lay in bed half naked

Listening to music by myself

Some would say I'm boring

They'd just hang me on a shelf

I like to people watch in coffee shops

And make judgmental remarks 

But hey at least I'm being honest 

Everyones thoughts can be dark

I'll often stare off into space

Disintegrating into the earth 

Maybe one day if I try hard enough 

It just might finally work

Reviews

[Stephen]

Sounds pretty cool to read indeed. Lying in a bed half naked? Sounds intriguing! I like concept, you know what? Being alone's, sometimes, what keeps us sane with the time .. and with the life as well cus, we better know about ourselves more when we're alone n go dive into the old memories of past reminding some old time how fast it moves and how soon the life reaches the ends. Nice work, i'd look forward reading yous work!

And Yeah, it's very cool to know about you a bit. Nice meeting you, Nikki!

[Nikki]

Thank you very much sweetheart,

[Stephen]

It`s all my pleasure, Sweety.

[Chris Micha]

I find watching people in coffee shops fun as hell. I often find myself making fun of everyone and I invite them to make fun of me, as well.

You got me on the first stanza, with the first line, of course. But I relate to it because that's me in a nutshell.

Great work! :)

[Hector Reyes]

That's how I feel everyday
Like dead a*s they say your boring but
They can't really tell if your boring if not getting to know you

[Rob Santana]

An eccentric piece. I love it. Your fifth stanza may need to be edited...

[MoriartyMesa]

i aint old enough to read this

[Nikki]

Hahaha... Woe is me isn't that a shameee.

[Luna Zerimar]

Woe...

I can relate so well.

Amazing.

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Everything pays off in the end:)

[@zeewhykay]

Nice introspective piece. There's nothing boring about listening to music in the peace and tranquility of your own bed.

Cheers ! Well done !

[Nikki]

Thank you!

[Innocent]

nicely written, well done. I too feel like "disintegrating into the earth" sometimes.