Death Trap

Thinking in the darkness is a death trap,

and I'm it's favourite prey.

Reviews

[Rebecca Leigh]

Yes, I know this phenomenon all too well

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I love the night also. Very nice use of words my friend.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Maybe the darkness is a friend, not a foe. It is oblivious to us, not trying to prey. Sometimes is the only place some of us find comfort. Anyway, the darkness in our own heads is, indeed, a deathtrap.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[icelandicblue]

I like this. The darkness may be an familiar state, but we can never really trust it.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you😊

[Arooj Purra]

nice thought and good poem.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Arooj Purra]

your welcome.

[Marianne Rose]

Great concise way to capture mind-traps that lead to death. I like it!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D

[Vesica Piscis]

Second favourite prey right here! Really enjoyed this. Thank you

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D

[Melody]

Whoah, nice job! You convey a really good message in a short and tidy poem. Loved it!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Short and moving, pretty much summarizing a lot of writers, I think (I know I can relate to this, can't speak for others).

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)))

[mou]

two line with one comma hit the thought perfectly.
like this style..really death trap!!!!!!!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)