Another Blank Page

It’s another blank page,

With feelings untold

It’s another sentence,

But without words

 

It’s another blank page,

With ink scribbled all over,

The ink that makes no sense

 

It’s another blank page,

With thoughts all over

Written with ink invisible

 

It’s another blank page,

Many thoughts to write,

Yet no words to describe

Reviews

[Johnny]

As poets where would we be without blank page? Or perhaps minds racing without sufficient pause to accommodate a complete thought? Your poem here smacks of something daoist, 100pnts!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!! :)

[Ruth]

The endless possibilities of that blank page are luring and yet sometimes such a page leads to a blank state of mind/purge...the imagery is strong and makes the poem tangible :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[prettybretty]

For me, it relates to my inability to write things in a journal that desperately need to be written. but every time i try to 'heal' myself, i can't. in hopes someone could read and understand a little, but i'm too weary to give my own words and the task ultimately seems meaningless. that's just me! you write with a mysteriousness that i don't always understand, yet we all find our own relations to your words. you always convey a pain as if there's someone who understands my own. please write forever, Shadowine! your words will last that long. xx

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so very much :D

[Nwang]

Meaningful and expressive. Nice write.
In the end we are all blank pages.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ! :D

[Diamond]

I simply love this writing. I got specially fond of it because many times those blank pages are the days, many of us spend. Subtle expression of a powerful feeling. I really really liked it. Good job.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)))

[Ardra]

Many thoughts to write yet no words to describe :) I understand these lines so well.....blank page.....very nicely penned

[iamshadowine]

Thank youu

[Joshua Haines]

I can totally understand this poem's meaning, create write well done.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

certainly been there...too many feelings, not enough ink...or too much ink and but too much confusion to spill it in the right places.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Mifa]

The endless struggle of the infamous 'writer's block' syndrome. I believe we all can relate here on WC. Good one.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Emily]

Love this!
Very creative idea!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D