Smoke

HE SMOKED,

AS HE PUFFED THE CIGARETTE,

HER HAPPINESS TURNED TO FUME.

 

Reviews

[R J Askew]

A three line drama. I like it. There's an intense finality here. Also it makes the imagination work. Who she? Who he? Why? Who cares about happiness anyway?

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for reviewing

[Firemay]

I like how you made it seem. Well done.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Rebecca Leigh]

very introspective! this piece leaves much to the imagination. well done

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for your review

[MightyMouse]

Hmmm... Lots to think about in such a short amount of words.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Jon Roggie]

Was it the distraction or the act?
Just curious.

[iamshadowine]

The act. Thanks for reviewing ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. Nice and proper ending to the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😃

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Grey Evanescent]

This makes me wonder what happened to their story. Really nice. Smoking in itself brings a lot of possibilities in one's life.

[Ashwin Shanker]

I see that you hate smokers :P ... I am one myself. hehe

[Junebug]

my advice is write more .

[Meshalini]

Lovely...you expressed the feelings of a girl who sees her loved ones smoke very nice...

Nicely done..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you =)