FATHOMED LOVE

I looked at the sky and blushed,

Because he saw me from the stars

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

cute brevity , a lot of imagery in few words. well done!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. Create place and vision for the reader. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Grey Evanescent]

it's short for something that holds so many things. The embarrassment, the love and that complicated emotion as you fall for someone unreachable.
Beautiful. Keep up! :)

[iamshadowine]

Thanks :)))

[Joshua Haines]

Great write. You should be pleased

[Jackie]

Provoking and clever. Thanks for sharing

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Good write..meaningful 😊

[iamshadowine]

Thanks :))

[Tony Jordan]

Quite simple yet profound writing. Power seeps between the lines.
Bravo!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[R J Askew]

The universe looking at itself to check that it exists.

[Diamond]

I love the feeling that these lines gave me. They changed my mood spontaneously. :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Ardra]

:) sweet ...and cute as always

[iamshadowine]

Thanks :)))