Sunkissed

As I walked towards the sun,

It held me close,

Kissed me firm,

And left me sunkissed

Reviews

[Jackie]

This one gives me a warm feeling. A lovely read. Thanks for sharing

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[BlakHeart]

lovely and simply amazing :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[andrew mitchell]

lovely brevity again, well done!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[Grey Evanescent]

I felt warmth crawl on my skin as i read the lines. The way you write just gives life to even the simplest words. Amazing piece! Keep up! :D

[iamshadowine]

Thanks ^_^

[Emily]

Beautiful wording and magical feeling.

[iamshadowine]

Thanks for reading

[Joshua Haines]

A vary interesting write this one.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Tony Jordan]

I felt like I was kissing something that doesn't even exist - weird eh?
Cool (but hot coz Sun)

[Matt Wilbur]

Simply superb personification, especially with something dear to me as the sun, (not this sun tho, a different one)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

pretty hot kiss.....mmmmm

lots of chapstick needed....

[iamshadowine]

xD thank you

[R J Askew]

Hmm, not so taken with this one. I baulked a little at the pic to start with. Phps I am in a melancholic mood and would prefer the opposite to sun.

As I walked towards the dark,
It turned away,
Spurned my lips,
And burned my throat