Dream

You were the dream,

that my eyes couldn't believe was real

Reviews

[Devi DM]

Sometimes, a few words mean more than many sentences.

Sometimes, a statement is worth more than a whole speech.

Sometimes, something so short and powerful is all that is needed.

Thank you for sharing your words.

[Rebecca Leigh]

wonderful sentiment, I love how much you said with such few words

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Mr.Write]

Sweetly succinct. Having a lover who's like a beautiful dream is what helps to keep me going some days.

[iamshadowine]

yes :) thank you for reading it

[Jackie]

Lovely. Short. But sweet and romantic

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Sandipta$]

Smtyms what our eyes see....
All r not true..... World is virtual.... Try to accept everything

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A bit short. A wonderful statement of love though.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[andrew mitchell]

Not your best for me but not bad at all, just some of yours have that wit, cleverness, and that spontaneity.

[iamshadowine]

I'm sorry to disappoint you and will work to not let that happen :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You said everything needed in the poem. Sometime we can receive a miracle in the emotion of love. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[CAPOLAVORO]

I just felt like I needed more lines from this. Anyway, this will surely melt somebody's heart so nice lines. :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :) and I will definitely take your review into consideration

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. So heart touching. I really liked it. You said a lot in a line.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much

[Najam Us Saher]

It was my pleasure.