Natalie, Amongst the Lightning

Natalie, amongst the lightning,
Laughing at the thunder
She and Mother Earth are drunken
On long awaited rain

Now she's dancing with the raindrops
Did her feet just leave the ground?
Oblivious to danger
She is not afraid

Natalie, amongst the lightning,
In this perfectly pure moment
She and the raging storm;
They are the same

Author's Note

Inspired by my youngest daughter.

Reviews

[MOON]

Lovely write , Natalie must be fearless .

[spiritwind]

Totally enraptured by this! Awesome! You put your reader there in the splendor of this moment. There is not one mis-step, not one word out of place. I keep re- reading it and gaining appreciation for your talent. You have just written this so well that your daughter is now inspiring us all. Absolutely top-notch poetry.

[Pencrafter]

I love the lighthearted feel conveyed by your lines. Hopefully, all of us might experience such a moment when our senses intertwine with our environment, creating a perfect locus in time.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

'..She and the raging storm; They are the same'. Love the poem; these lines are exceptional.

[daedalus14]

Beautiful poem uncle. It really describes natalie, And she does love to play in the rain.

[icaros13]

Siyo, Nephew! When can we expect beautiful profound words of life to flow from your profile?

[Corset]

Children are so beautiful, this poem makes me smile very big, so sweet.

[Renée]

Looks like someones drought is over...
A writing from the heart.. Beautiful Subject + Beautiful Writing = Perfect !

[icaros13]

Yeah... I've been experiencing what I like to refer to as "poetic diarrhea" the last twenty four hours...

[icaros13]

Thank you so much for your kind words. *blush*

[Emily B]

amazing

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. incredibly inspiring work, monsieur ... perfectly written ... i loved the imagery ... fearlessness is the best trait on earth ... your little gem is as precious as her father :) ...