Visitation

My Father passed twelve years ago, but I saw him today.
I was having my morning coffee, reading poetry, and
there he was, smoking my pipe,
watching me from my reflection.

Reviews

[Corset]

awww, there are worst things in life than becoming our parents, especially if our parents rocked :) You are not getting older, you are getting better!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Always a shock to me when my mother looks out at me! You summed it up.

[Sami Khalil]

The ending is a deep thought. Thank you for amazing thoughts.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's really good. Sometimes I see my dad in my face and it scares the crap out of me

[Lily Mae]

I could feel this to my core.. Short but so powerful.. that is true talent..xo I often see my father in my reflection.. especially when having coffee and reading or writing..xo

[Renée]

tender moment... ( :

[afra]

thats creepy

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. perhaps he wishes to bless you ... to share some precious moments with you ... to connect with you to let you know he loves you ... a beautiful poem ... so very loving ... sheer magic ...

[icaros13]

It happens sometimes...I will pass a mirror or window and catch a glimpse of him from the corner of my eye, and it's my own reflection...

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. there's no scientific evidence to support this but i do believe that just as we're genetically connected ... our consciousness is also connected ... if we inherit physical traits and a person lives in us ... then, it makes sense that we inherit mental traits and the person we inherit from lives in us ... i have a feeling scientists will eventually reveal this to us ...

[icaros13]

I agree completely.