Missing the Moon

my apologies...

I'm not too smooth
on the bad days
I can be harsh,
a bit unfair

Sometimes the hurt
drips on the paper;
aggressive darts
in passive games

I'm getting better
with each sunrise,
not as familiar
with the moon,

No matter what
your situation
don't be afraid
to say hello

Reviews

[...]

. a very heartfelt, earnest, honest, introspective, and endearing piece of poetry ... i'm sure a very charming poet and a very charming person wrote it ... if this is a message, i wish and pray and hope with all my heart that it reaches the intended recipient ...

[Elizabeth]

The second and third stanzas really resonate.

[Emily B]

hello

[Corset]

We all have our bad days ;) But you are as smooth as can be! It doesn't seem to matter what your pen puts on paper it sings with emotion every time! Dropping in to say Hello! :)

[afra]

beautiful