Dances With Spiders

Formerly "Hair and Spiders"

Looking for parking
The only space was where
The spider
Admired
Your hair
That day

Reviews

[Kristallo]

Looking for parking on campus is like looking for a needle in a haystack, it took me fifteen minutes of driving around to find somewhere to park so I could run in for a starbucks this morning, and what do I find when I come back out? A ticket for being in visitors parking!

Loved the poem, too. It's cute. ;)

[Renée]

( : Sweet !

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. the sights and sounds that trigger memories are as poetic as they are baffling ... and ... of course ... moving ... this piece is all that and more ... a very intriguing and unforgettable micro epic ... i can't help but want to know more about the spider story :P ...

[icaros13]

I'm working on it, my friend. Started today.

[Baby Ricochet]

Cryptic. Heavy man.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice vision create by the excellent poem. Spiders and finding a parking spot always add to a tale. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote