Enlightenment

Had I been Edmond Halley
When King of Heavens he was crowned
My name would be immortal
But I'd be dead next time around
My excitement soon replaced
With a perpetual sad frown
For I'd know I'd reached my grandest up
The only way from here was down

Reviews

[MOON]

Oh this is so clever , downhill from here , Serah is right you are excellent and 13 is a lucky number.

[Corset]

oh now I'll have to study up on that guy because unless I do I wont know what this is about . I'll have to get back to this one :)

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. haha!!! ... this ode to black humour is actually very profound and perceptive ... my "flamboyant one-liner" of the day (inspired by this piece would be ... "enlightenment is depressing because greatness is truly humbling" :) ...