Do you know?

Do you know
When I see

You

I'm helpless
Words elude me
My brain goes numb

That smile,
Your patience with
My children

Your graceful dance
Your quiet manner
Your stunning intellect

Do you know
I want to be
More than friends?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. The gentle thoughts and description of the graceful and intellect person. Would be easy to fall into love with a kind hearten person. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Corset]

Well if she doesn't, you should tell her/him. Even if she calls you a stalker and insults you to no end, you should tell them. (giggling @ what Baby said)

[icaros13]

Maybe.... I almost asked her out awhile back, but like always, I choked.

[Corset]

well to that I say, the worst thing she can do is say no, and if she a decent person she'll make you feel better about it, if she's not, she'll be mean, and then you'll know why you aren't meant to go out with her, but either way she's not going to go gorilla on your a*s if you are repectful about it.

[Emily B]

you are a straight shooter, so honest and vulnerable and full of possibilities :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ugh. The friends zone. A guy's got a better chance of breaking out of guontnimo bay than he does breaking the friends zone, but hey, what do I know. I'm just a philistine, right?