Missing You

Missed you more
last night it seems
I cried and yearned
for nights we never
held each other
When lost and hurt feelings
Made my heart quiver
Uptight,subconcious
battle of inner thoughts
and feelings

Mixed up world
frightening images
Broken, angry And sad
felt the same blue and that
missin' you, has been like
a thousand rainy days
and nights, sharp
Like cold winter
Mysteries of life
twisting balance and justice

Then closer together
finally, and hours of pleasure
Frozen in tme, for a moment
Not the last time, forever?
In this life, mine
Wishing to travel in time..
closer in time
But I will always..
I'll love you still..
until the end of time

Reviews

[Mr Whiskers]

I enjoyed this oiece, being able to relate to it in the way it describes the yearning, the missing and loneliness. It felt a bit broken up on the second stanza, like you thought too hard on how to say it. Then I read it out loud to myself and it felt much better. All in all, a good write!

[Solst Rapture]

I do enjoy the pace of this poem. It's rather like a stream of passion oozing out of you. It's a very good depiction of the foibles of people - the inability to see things simply. Everything takes on infinite forms in this world. Love is the biggest mystery of them all, until it becomes clear.

A great remembrance of that fragile and engulfing passion. Keep going. Stretch it out. Maybe you have. I'll seek you out when I have more time to see if you have.

Thanks for writing.
regards,
Solst

[Orlando Murcia]

This was a beautiful poem, I enjoyed listening and feeling your heart on this one. Orlando Murcia