sun flower

another short poem a little longer than the others. this one was inspired by a contest.

It stands alone, vibrant like the sun.

Tall and strong on its own

but still a delicate flower.

A thing of beauty blooms in darkness 

when the sun is covered.

It's life is unseen

and it wilts and dies

alone.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the description. You create life and death with skill of the sun flower. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PaleWriter]

The sudden change in the last three lines do not fit the poem to me. I would imagine you did this on behalf of the color scheme.

[Greg Agee]

Lonely life of a sunflower. Well represented. Thank You !

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep it up!