Life

My interpretation of life.

Life...

...is an annoying sibling trying to get your goat.

Life...

...is getting sick on a special day.

Life...

...is a memory, lost in the clouds.

Life...

 ...is a new puppy running around getting used to its new home.

Life...

...is a sneaker that is worn and torn but still holding on.

Life...

...is a new year with family and friends, ready to start fresh.

Life...

...is taking another step forward, prepared for the unknown.

Life...

...is a mystery, letting go of the past...

...and waiting to see what's in store.

Reviews

[ivizarx]

Pretty balanced and normal subject-wise, but what's the real kick about this poem is what perfectlyadapted pointed out in their review, which was the formatting of it. In opinions here, think it's an alright attempt at something experimental since I haven't seen this kind of poetry before (then again, I haven't researched every type of poetry there is so possibly I overlooked this if you were to say you didn't think this one up).
If you wish for constructive criticism from this one, next time try for more something towards an emotional-basis. Most good poetry strikes with pin-point focus on a specific emotion to bash it into the reader's head by the time they finish it. Use "angst" and "rage" for motivating someone in a political way (which in opinions here again, we need more of nowadays) or "sadness" and "depression" to move someone about a certain event in life that requires either "pity" or "understanding". Emotions are a valuable tool to focus on within poetry, just a good thing to keep in mind when writing it.

[perfectlyadapted]

I really enjoyed this. Life really is all those things and more.
Nice formatting as well.