I cant take it anymore

I cant take it anymore

The pain, the pain!

My head hurts,

My body aches

My wrists burn

All of this is because of u

I want to die because of your lies

You hurt me, physically and emotionally

I want to be a free spirit

Roaming the earth

No one could see me

No one could feel me

Your words cut like a sharp knife.

Why oh why?

Why are you so cruel?

I stood on the edge of a bridge,

but instead of helping,

You pushed me

And i fell

I fell into the chambers of darkness

I went to hell.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a really sad piece. I think you did well though. I really enjoyed reading this. I understand how this feels though. I feel this pain all of the time, but that's because of my own stupid mistakes.

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My Goodness this is so tragic really. I can feel like a rocket trapped up in abottle awaiting to explode. The angerness. Such sadness upon the heart. I am so sorry about the emotions poured into this. No one needs to feel like this.

[AreWeBothCrazy]

The emotions here are incredibly powerful, you do a great job of portraying them. This poem is so relateable and I know how you are feeling, you're not alone. Keep writing, I look forward to more