Crying In The Rain

Stand there alone.

Crying in the rain.

Blood running down my arms

Falling to my knees for the pain is far too great.

Your addicted to seeing me cry

Your addicted to my pain

But i just want it to go away

I dont want you too see me like this

im alone in the rain

Trying to figure out what the hell happened

Alone at night

Crying in the rain

Running away from it all

Running away from the pain

But i know it will stay with me

Until the day I die

And that thought makes you smile

I hope your happy

When were both Burning in Hell.

Prepare your weapon.

This ends now.

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

Those last two lines really caught my attention:

Prepare your weapon
This ends now

You were able to mix such anger and grief into one poem that it synched hand in hand. Great write!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was anger filled, but very nice. I really liked this. I know how it feels to cry in the rain. I've done that several times. I don't want people to know I was crying. Rain hides the fact you are crying...that's why I love it...just like I love the poem...