Intoxication

Another song I made

Intoxication

And when I hit the ground
It took my breath away~!
And when I opened my eyes
Youre the first thing I saw~!

Why is life so hard?
(Why is love so easy?)
Let your warm arms hold me till my final night
(Why is life so hard?)

Cut my wrists and black my eyes
Wait for the full moons intoxication
To kill my minds suicide stall
No more living - my suicide tendency

Pull the trigger to the last decent
Wishing we had never met
closed your eyes- Youre wasting time
Pull the trigger.
Soon to suicide~!

I loved you- You loved me
And still my sorrow you didnt see
Whats going on?
How can this be?
Pull the trigger- my suicide tendency~!

Count your blessings, this is my last time
Count your blessings, this is my last try
Count your blessings, for every second lie.
Pull the trigger, my suicidal dear...


 

Author's Note

I made this out if experiance. Just not with a trigger...But with bottles.

Reviews

[Vague]

I like how you turned your, "tendency," into a literal tendency throughout the poem. It was very illustrative of what it's like to have recurring thoughts you can't control.

Overall nice poem with neat imagery, and an unusual precision.