nature's beauty

a poem on nature plz raed and reveiw

Nature.

The way it is.

The way it talks to you.

You have to pay attention to notice her words.

She speaks to you all the time.

Through her leaves rustling.

Through her wind whistling.

Through her flowers growing.

Listen.

She comforts you with her beauty.

You have to notice.

Pay attention.

Take a break and realize.

If leaves didn't turn red, there would be no red.

If the sun hadn't been orange, there would be no orange.

If daisies hadn't been yellow, there would be no yellow.

If grass and leaves hadn't been green, there would be no green.

If the sky wasn't blue, there would be no blue.

If lilies weren't purple, there would be no purple.

Stop.

Think.

She wants to be enjoyed.

Enjoy her.

Author's Note

can you please tell me what you think? i want to know.

Reviews

[MusicManiac]

Hi Amy!

Nature is always a beautiful thing to write about! The importance that it plays in life-as-we-know-it is undeniable, yet often overlooked and you did a great job of capturing that!

One thing that I did notice was that you start of referring to nature as "it," then change to "her." The change disrupted the flow of the poem for me a bit. That is just a small inconsistency, though!

~MusicManiac

[Shapirta]

I did that on purpose. the beginning is just talking about nature, but as you get to know nature, she becomes her