a sad rainbow

a poem on a sad rainbow please read and review!

Have you ever seen a sad rainbow?

with the colors of depression?

have you seen a sad rainbow?

that gave you a sorrowful impression?

Have you ever seen a sad rainbow?

made of black, white, and grey?

have you seen a sad rainbow?

which made you heavyhearted all day?

no you have not seen a sad rainbow.

because they're only here for happiness.

you have not seen a sad rainbow.

for they are just fabulous.

Author's Note

please review! i want to know what you think!

Reviews

[Kevin Manson]

This made me smile. Very well written.

[Shapirta]

thank you!

[Tricia Pattinson]

I like the way you build an image and deliver your message. This is an interesting and fun write. Brought a smile.

[Shapirta]

thanks, tricia

[Kieta!]

This is a sweet, beautiful poem! :) I'm glad there are only happy rainbows in the sky! Great job Amy! :)

[Shapirta]

thanks, kieta

[Baby Ricochet]

The ending gave me a good chuckle. Excellent write.

[Shapirta]

thanks a lot!

[RayXor]

very nice im more of a dark poetry person but this made me smile

[Shapirta]

thanks, and i could tell by your profile pic! lol =)

[RayXor]

i just dont take good smiley pic.s lol plus my daughter said i look like batman in this one :)

[Shapirta]

shes right! i just noticed that, lol

[Sindu]

I really like it Amy :)
Every colour drains when we are depressed but it also resides in us to make it fabulous again..
pretty..

[Shapirta]

thanks, sindu

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a very well constructed poem with good rhyme, a nice piece. A lot of people with mature profiles won't be able to friend you, just so you know.

[Shapirta]

i know that. is till dont understand why you would make your profile mature though. unless there is ****, than I cannot figure it out

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, my dear, if there are things on it WC deems Mature, we get in trouble for not rating it mature.

[Shapirta]

like what?

[Lyn Anderson]

anything with content that would seem grown up, but particularly the birds and bees. You see, not even saying the word ...

[Shapirta]

birds and bees? wierd hint!

[Lyn Anderson]

Never mind, you will figure it out. Anything that might be in a movie or book not intended for children.

[Haley Lynn Thomas]

Very cute! And considering you're so young I'm impressed. Keep writing!

[Shapirta]

thanks, haley

[Botania]

God's covenant with Noah... Rainbows are beautiful indeed. A happy poem that reminds us of the positives of rainbows by contrasting with nonexistent negatives. Very nice job.

[Deepwater]

good pen to paper here on your poem keep writing

[Shapirta]

thanks, deep!