Bananas ( from a point of view of someone who despises bananas)

please don't get offended if you like bananas!

Yellow toxication

gross, says an entire nation

enough to deflate the jubilation

that yellow intoxication

Author's Note

please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Botania]

I like this. There's the word toxic in intoxication. haha

[rach]

Haha nice work, your words made me smile.

[Shapirta]

thanks =)

[The Twin Arenas]

pretty good. I can't believe you're 11. good vocabulary.

I'm glad you didn't pick the brightest yellow imaginable.

[Shapirta]

thanks! i was gonna, but then i couldn't see it, so i just did this

[The Twin Arenas]

I bet you were.

[Shapirta]

lol =) =) =)

[Kevin Manson]

Haha! A cute little poem! 3/5 :3

[Shapirta]

thanks, kevin!