Red Silken Sheets

Two lovers!

     Red hot silken sheets

     Make our flesh come alive

     Entwine our bodies

     Let's taste each other all night

     And when day breaks let's not stop

Author's Note

Tanka Poem

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Good work. Loved that night you sang.

[Rachel Fitzgerald-Feele..]

Hi Kathy, tanka and haiku poetry is new for me today 26th August 2023. One being 3 lines and the other 5. I get mixed up with the syllables. But a nice read. Concise!

[William Michael Reeves]

Syllables of lust you write
Keeps the reader up all night

I think the sheets are about to combust!!

[Betty Hermelee]

love the picture and your words do echo this. Why stop passion when it grasps you into a sensual frenzy. I like the idea of continuing the scene into the daylight, why not?
Nicely crafted.
Best, B

[Robert Haigh]

All night love is for the young... I can still remember it! lol! As you get older, friendship becomes more important than sex, but it's nice to remember when! A sensual and racy poem!

[Chris Shaw]

Plenty of red hot thinking here. Nothing like a good love in. Thanks Kathy.

Chris

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you, Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)

[Lisasview]

Clever poem...not sure how Tanka poetry works..but I did really like it and the red image..
so good...
Lisa, now in Spain

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you for stopping by!

[Lisasview]

My pleasure..
Look forward to reading your thoughts on one of my poems...you might like my newest sensual poem Wanting...
Lisa, 7am in Spain

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I used to get "entwined"---
such a good feeling...and not stopping at day break....
love has no clock.
j.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you for stopping by!

[Temperance]

Very steamy my dear, Kathy. Great choice of words to make this short piece have such a strong affect. Similar to my "Delight". "Entwine our bodies, Let's taste each other all night". My favorite lines. Thank you for posting. Temperance

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[Cherrie]

This poem is fueled with energy and sparks if youth, and passion.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you, Cherrie!