The Musical

Birds singing their own music.

 

Birds sing a melodic ballad

while cascading the blue sky.

Twirling and singing while

bringing a beautiful sight.

Author's Note

Something different I wanted to try, tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Loner]

A colorful image portrayed of Nature...... nice job!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely.....!!!!!!!!!!! Full of Life..!!!!!

[Kimberly]

This is great. Very nice.

[Stacey Watts]

Very descriptive and beautiful. Very much wishing for the warmth of spring. enjoyed as always.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it. Any day with a blue sky and singing birds is a good one :)

[Marie Harrison]

I loved it. I can hear and see them now. Beautiful poem.

[Valentine]

Some how you made the words work..short ones are harder for me..Kathie

[Ron]

Very difficult to bring quarto lines off. Personally I love the first three lines. Especially line three. Line 4 could be more pithy for me but who am I ? A mere English old fuddy duddy! I love my poetic twinnies.

[underwriter]

i love some of the descriptive words you have used!! 'melodic, cascading, twirling' a wonderful use of imegery in a short poem! beautiful!