losing my mind

im losing my mind when the wind blows,im losing my mind when nobody knows,i fell like i could die at anytime,becuase when i lose my mind i cant see what is right in front of me,i feel as though im young,i feel like i cant do anything right,i feel like my life is boring,i feel like i shouldnt write i feel like somthing wants me to die,but when i dont it wants me to cry,this peom is good because i thought about this when i was in the hood, this is the end of this peom, so go on home.  ~imb126 aka ms.lady~

Author's Note

this peom is the one i like the most oh and ms.writer is my bestest friend and we will always be that way till the end.

Reviews

[P.S I Love You]

this is a very good poem. I like the way that you used your words. I agree with what you wrote. :) Great Job keep writing more.

[Mitch*Dandy]

you already lost your mind.. lol naw jk.. like the poem though =P

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

You have me smiling......pleasantly, interestingly..this just brings a smile..have you thought of adding music to this one......