Jigsaw To Me

I've been going through something lately, but I honestly don't know what it is. I just feel empty. The only thing that's helping me with it is writing. This is the song I wrote about it.

Right before I shed these tears

I wish to feel something that appears

Inside of me

Laughter or glee.

 

I want to feel nothing but altitude

Someone to share the world

Below my feet

I'd hope to keep

 

I don't understand the status of this presence

Being trapped is too emmence

 

I want to grow 50 ft. tall

Above the feelings looking down at me of all

The pain, I feel ashamed

But I don't know why this is happening to me

What have I done for this to be

It's all jigsaw to me.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Isaac]

lol my bad xD aww no its fine! thanks for your honesty and your feedback

[anonymouse]

hey i loved it. one slight error--the editor in me, you know that--sorry, don't mean to go all psycho english teacher on you--is immense, not emmence. hugs, though!
so sweetie pie-ish.
no offense if you think that's bad. iloved it/