Senryu

My attempt... Dale Vincent Deadmond

There is a need for
more Jesus Christ than Santa
at this time of year.

Or

Jesus Christ was born
in a cold stable at night
Christmas is about him.

Or

Dale Vincent Deadmond
you are an awesome writer
Thanks for the friendship


Never heard of this type of poetry before. Thanks. :)

Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions.

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

I appreciated this poem I think that more people should be focusing on him during the holidays.

[andrew mitchell]

A clever write I enjoyed the humour that has a twist!