Windchime

Oh windchime
blowing in the breeze
dancing & swaying
playing beautiful music
for the birds today

Oh colorful beauty
swinging in the trees
clinking & clanging
your soulful songs
for butterflies at play

Oh windchime
pirouetting with such ease
prancing & waving
your crystal rainbows
for the sunshine rays

https://youtu.be/ZjxgD2HdxMI

Reviews

[Im His Daughter]

Aww thank you. I view things like a video, since I am a painter on top of writing, I write like it too. There has to be color, or a flow. A movement of some sort. Thank you for the review. Appreciate it.

[Weeping willow]

Very beautiful expression,loved the images flowing through as I saw the picture you painted with words;-]

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Just so lovely and lyrical. Lovely form and rhyme. "Waving your crystal rainbows"- beautiful imagery. Love it!

[Gee]

With Jacob, love the gentle sound in the breeze

[Im His Daughter]

WOW, thanks for the comments! Appreciate it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can hear them....and love that sound.

[Najam Us Saher]

So descriptive poem. It is very melodious just like a windchime...I really liked it.