Grief

Grief never stops

the pain never ends

your heart never forgets

the love left, sits in limbo forever

Until someone grabs your heart & holds

onto it, making it whole until it feels love again

If that never happens... well then

you are left in limbo crying & dying inside

So much love to give, yet no one wants it

crying

       dying

              limbo

grief

     never

            stops

Author's Note

The one man who knew, me. This man was my dreams. This man I love & miss for as long as the sun & moon shall rise & fall. I knew his hearts cry right before Jesus took him to heaven. I love you & miss you so much Paul. Cancer made him bloat up in weight. This photo was taken on his final trip to Cuba before he died on Thanksgiving Day Oct 12th 2008
1968 - 2008

Reviews

[Kate Z.]

Grief doesn't stop, but it does settle into a sort of routine. You go on living. Others need us, need us to share our experience so that when - not if, but when - their grief comes, they will know that it's possible to survive. Keep writing. This is so well expressed!

[Im His Daughter]

Thank You Writ Rajat. Today is our 150th Birthday of Canada. Our Canada Day & it was something we did with my children every year for about 10 yrs. Some things are hard to get over. Yes tomorrow may be a better day. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. Blessings.

[writ rajat]

Losing a person whom we love is most sad moment sad to know and sorry for your loss. but I would like to advice that be happy it will keep happy his soul god bless you

[Im His Daughter]

Thank you Weeping Willow. I miss him so much today.

[Weeping willow]

Wow! beautiful write filled with heartache emotions.So sorry for the loss of your love;-

[Im His Daughter]

Thank you Jacob. It is the worst.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the worst pain is the heart in Limbo for eternity...so sorry for your loss.

[Im His Daughter]

Thank you Mr. Writer, I appreciate it.. just certain days of the year knock me flat on my a*s.. today is one of them.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Mr.Writer]

I truly agree! Grief doesn't stop... At some point in our lives, we'll have grief, find happiness then, and later grief comes back
Well done!
Greatly explained, keep it up!
Really sorry to hear about the tragedy

[Im His Daughter]

Thank You Damien, Canada Day is hard today, we used to take my kids out. They are now 20 & 22. I listened to your song, it was awesome.. Feel free to dig deep in my writings there are tons on here.. over 450. Hard day today, hibernating in darkened bedroom by laptop light.. :'(