Laying it down

commented on a poem of Tidbits called "Short version".. made me think my comment would be a great poem after i wrote it..

darkness & anger is forbidden,

lying on a bed of nails is

a sacrifice

for the sin of

the

pain,

darkness

& anger..

"laying it down is the hardest thing"..

focussing

on where we have failed

because our lives are

uncentered & never perfect.

"we are human"

but

Will,

Faith

& Hope is

what gets us through

 to another day..

easy to judge

the past

but not so easy

to judge

the future.

Reviews

[Frank F. Atanacio]

very well done keep it up :) Frank

[Sunflower 20]

good job. very enjobale read.

[Raven]

Well said. the last lines: easy to judge the past but not so easy to judge
the future. are really true. We indeed are only human.