Miss you

I love as much as a sister dear friend,
Our friendship had cracks but they quickly did mend.
That time at the beach where you found me a stone,
Shaped like a heart, with a dark silver tone.

Then last week you told me your moving away,
I'll think and think about every day,
How we laughed and we cried in each other's arms.
And how we shared the same quirks and we shared the same charms.

From the coast of Orlando please be thinking of me,
Ours names that we carved in that giant oak tree.
I'll see you sometime, we have meetings that pend,
I'll be waiting but truly, I'll miss you best friend.

Reviews

[BlackRose]

What a sweet heartfelt piece. Just beautiful! :o)

@{/:o)

[Imogen.E]

Thank you very much, I do miss my friend a lot!! :)

[BlackRose]

We all miss someone regardless of who they are living or passed. :o/ :o)

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful, heartfelt piece :) x

[Imogen.E]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Sami Khalil]

A well written poem. Thank you for sharing...:).........

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you like it :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)......................

[KeeD]

Wow for your age you write so so so so well. This is amazing and so sweet. Brings back memories of having something so pure and true as a friendship and pact between the person who understood you the most.

[Imogen.E]

Thanks for the review. I'm just quite upset that someone I'm so close too has to move away!

[KeeD]

You might be upset, but when you write about it we as readers don't see you as upset we see only see the amazing memories and cherished friendship you have with your (friend/sister). It's refreshing and awesome to read such a warm write.

[Imogen.E]

Thanks I'm really glad that I could just get it off my chest :)