Fade

That feeling we get when we like someone we shouldn't.

Fade

I can’t

Or better yet, I shouldn’t.

But, I do.

Do you?

I shouldn’t ask,

You shouldn’t say.

It wouldn’t last,

This feeling will fade.

 

Reviews

[Emily]

This is fun! The fragments reflect the hesitation that you would actually feel in a situation like this. I like it a lot!

[Tree]

Just a few verses but this resonated. Poetry that ''thinks out loud'' carries with it a special power. Well written piece Inda. I related..

[Inda]

Thanks, means a lot.

[Inda]

Thanks, lol.

[KAOlmsted]

Yay...you're not a one hit wonder! *laugh* This is excellent. So many people will relate to this. Great job, Inda.