Sleep

Thoughts I had before I fell asleep.

Sleep

 

Green smudge

Stains

The purple shirt.

The heart, nonstop

And the night is uncertain.

The three legged cat searches

For his owner

And I search for sleep.

Author's Note

I think is too vague no?

Reviews

[CreativeStroke]

I don't think this piece is too vague, but whatever you did here worked for you. This piece is intriguing and I enjoy reading things that stop and cause me to think. That's what you did here with this piece.

[FocusedAmnesia]

It's not too vague. Intriguing.

[Tree]

Not too vague. It's a fine line. But good poetry always allows some room for the readers imagination to fill in the blanks. I enjoyed this piece, enjoyed the imagery

[Inda]

Thanks, sometimes it's hard for me to tell if i cross that line.

[Rob Santana]

haha, I don't even know what vague means, But I will say that this is an interesting write. Sounds like your just getting into your dream cycle,just warming up for some serious dreaming.

[Inda]

thanks and yeah i was! lol

[KAOlmsted]

Sometimes vague is good...it is here.

p.s. just a small bit of advice: when you post your poetry, make sure you label it as poetry, because not a lot of people click on stories ;-)

[Inda]

Thnx, didn't notice.