dance

inner struggle in love.

Dance

 

I wrote you a love letter today,

Just a line or two;

To tell you the truth,

I didn’t know what to say.

 

I can’t tell you I love you,

I’m not quite there.

Can’t say I need you,

You might get scared.

 

So I said hello

And how are you?

I think I like you-

What should we do?

Reviews

[Emily]

I love this! It's simple yet profound. You made it flow so effortlessly! I also like that there isn't a nice resolution at the end. Nicely done!

[Lady of the Lake]

I love this poem's "flow"! :) And how simple it is - that really adds a kind of innocence to it... I don't know haha all I know is I can appreciate this poem's beauty :)

[william keepers]

A sweet and innocent poem Inda that definitely comes across as a dance. Nicely constructed with a beautiful flow. It reads me of the teenaged dreams of love I had so many years ago... Well done!

[Inda]

Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time. Was working all day yesterday so I thank you now!