Regret

Some rambling.

Regret

 

With time all words are wise,

Fire burns the wood and

Causes the flames to rise.

Life changes-it’s out of your hand.

 

Photographs capture a moment

Everyone forgets.

Hate: love begets.

And yet we lament.

 

Immortals- those we’ve forgiven.

Their sins no one ever recalls.

Wildly the soul tonight is driven,

But it cannot escape these walls.

 

I am trapped inside these walls of abstraction.

Embedded in cement,

Unquestionable the attraction

That causes the heart to repent.

Reviews

[de_maruf]

done a good job

[Inda]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

i like the depth of your words and i enjoyed the "relaxed" rhythm!

[Inda]

Thanks for the R&R glad you liked it.

[quinfinn]

absolutely! and i will take r/r on poetry

[Elvis Gilley]

your imagery is great. the rhythm I feel is a bit loose. all in all a good job

[Inda]

Thanks for the review.