Poison

A Poem by Inda

We are all lied to

Poison

Smudge of poison on your lips,

Drips and rolls onto your hips.

I drink it up like wine,

Such a fool; I thought you were mine.

© 2012 Inda

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Carolann Dowsett

Love can be a deceptive lie, especially when mixed with desire

Posted 13 Years Ago

K-mo

very powerful words there, nice work!

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thank you!

13 Years Ago

your welcome! I like it

KAOlmsted

I love it...poisonous lies. Brevity works here. Well done, Inda.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

13 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it. :)

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Added on December 27, 2012
Last Updated on December 27, 2012

Author

Inda

miami, FL

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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..