Gone

A Poem by Inda

Gone

Gone, it’s all gone

Like the youth,

Like fresh fruit.

It’s all over with, done.

No second chance,

last glance.

Romance’s end;

No I don’t want to be your friend.

© 2013 Inda

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KAOlmsted

Oh wow, Inda...that's just crazy good. That last line...ye-ow, sucker punch. Very cool.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

13 Years Ago

Thanks glad you liked it!

13 Years Ago

My pleasure.

Michael Kevin Spencer

This was great, you should write a sequel called More.

I've felt like this, SO many times.

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it.

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Added on January 8, 2013
Last Updated on January 8, 2013

Author

Inda

miami, FL

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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..