Fair

Fair

 

Sunny skies;

Lover dies

And children live,

Some take, others give.

On and on

The wheel turns

Endless,

Careless,

Fair;

Death standing there

At my door

-time; I dare ask for more.

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow I need to think on this one, its very thought provoking. I love the illusion of having fun at the fair whilst death waits at the door.

[Inda]

Actually here fair is meant to be fair treatment or judgement rather, but i can see how the wheel can lead to that conclusion. :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Ah ok that makes more sense but still I saw a summer fair when I read it. Nice work. :)

[Inda]

thanks!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Reading again your intent is clear, its funny how our mind wanders into places it was never meant to go. Either way I love your writing, it always takes me somewhere. :)

[Inda]

Thank you so much, your writing is always honest and that's why i enjoy reading it.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)