A need

A Need

 

Cracks on the walls,

a gust of wind,

you change your mind

and it all falls.

 

Dust in the air,

debris on your hair

and a tear;

the culmination of my biggest fear.

 

Clouds of gray,

fingers bleed.

-I don’t want you to stay,

this is a need.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Because need is so much more than want...definitely. Good work, Inda.

[Baby Ricochet]

Cracked walls, dust, debris, bleeding fingers, fear. It made me think of Iraq. Great poem bro.

[Inda]

Glad you liked it!

[Adam Whitworth]

well done

[Inda]

Thank you!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Full of desperate longing, not a want but a need, when love gets like that it can become very painful. Another awesome write.

[Inda]

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)