Soldier's Regret

Soldier’s Regret

 

Such a distance

I keep.

Such existence

 and nights that grants me no sleep.

Unruly thoughts

of battles fought

some won and some lost;

all the lives it cost.

Weary eyes,

faces

covered by hands,

corpses buried in sand.

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

it sumps up the lives of the soldiers....vry well written

[quinfinn]

night terrors and sweats and flashbacks are a real and very profound part of a soldiers world, especially after some trauma of battle. excellent write!

[Adam Whitworth]

short

[Inda]

yep :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is heavy I can only imagine the torments soldiers must go through. Another wonderful write.

[Inda]

Thank you and yeah i can't even begin to phantom how they feel.