Empty Cup of Light

Empty Cup of Light

 

There’s light

I swear,

just look right

in there.

 

Conscientious lie,

I don’t know

why

I said it now.

 

I guess there’s a glimmer,

shadow of a dreamer

still.

Yet, such emptiness- no one could fill.

 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Good one inda

[Inda]

Thanks.

[rnuff]

Enjoyed this write, very nicely written.

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you liked it. I had my doubts on this one.

[Carolann Dowsett]

A glimmer of light is better than no light at all. I understand the emptiness that no one can fill. Nicely written.

[Inda]

Thank you, means a lot. :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Adam Whitworth]

short. well done

[Inda]

Thanks