The End

The End

 

Awaken,

mistaken

again

-such pain.

 

Look around,

hear the sound

of the truth,

curt and brute.

 

Love has gone,

left no phone

or picture of its face;

not a trace.

 

Cry if you must,

even steel rust.

This cannot mend,

this is the end.

 

 

Reviews

[Perri]

I really like your rhyming...it's so easy to get wrong but it flows nicely in this =]

[Inda]

Thank you :)

[rnuff]

very nicely done, can feel the emotions.

[Inda]

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

[plainme]

Great flow in this and it feels so real, well done.

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you liked it.