Words

This is what i feel sometimes when i write.

Words

A few words

empty,

closing no doors,

forgotten easily.

Scattered around,

quiet, making no sound.

Devoid of meaning,

feeling.

Filling the page,

showing no fear, sadness or rage.

Helping no one at all,

rising without risking a fall.

Colorless,

odorless.

A bunch of words you cannot collect,

words one easily forgets.

Saying

nothing,

no agenda to condemn.

Words on a page, because that’s where I want them.

Reviews

[Vertigoingnowhere]

OH MY GOSH! i absolutly love this! This is GREAT. I am so glad you shared this with us. Mind checking out some of my stuff? Thanks
~High School

[Inda]

Thanks for your enthusiasm, glad you enjoyed it and thank you for making it a favorite of yours; the biggest compliment I've received in a while. :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Your words have heaps of meaning, they are full of emotion and touch the heart of the reader. Never think that they don't you are a talented writer. So keep writing.

[Inda]

Thank you, I just meant that sometimes you just want to write and don't really have a reason why. Again thank you for your kind words! :D

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh that is so true, I got the sense that you were being down on yourself, though that's probably just me today. :)

[Inda]

Well smile! ;)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Ok :)

[rnuff]

Love it especially the last two lines.

[Inda]

Thank you! :)