Dismissed

A Poem by Inda

Dismissed

Automatic your dismissal,

your thoughts are small

minded,

blinded

by an old book.

Moves like a rook.

The knight

is swift in the night,

in search of the queen.

Beauty remains unseen.

The king remains still,

his fat belly, pastry filled.

© 2013 Inda

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Carolann Dowsett

Oooo I love this, great imagery, took me into a fantasy of sorts.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

12 Years Ago

Welcome :)

SHEEMA HUQ

very nicely penned
well done

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thanks :)

InsanityWriter

Nice. :) Your imagery was well done. ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on January 26, 2013
Last Updated on January 26, 2013

Author

Inda

miami, FL

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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..