Shrewd

Shrewd

 

Get up old man,

no one’s waiting

for you, but you got a plan

and it’s working.

 

She thinks you’re cute,

astute.

Smile old man; chuckle even,

you got to earn this; nothing is given.

 

Lean in for that kiss

-you miss.

She backs off;

you didn’t spend enough.

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh I like this its lots of fun. Shame he missed out though :) Nicely written.

[Inda]

Yeah this was a fun write for me, he did miss, but to
Me that's more interesting. Thanks for the review!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Lucien Maier]

greaat word work. The words really heightened the excitement build up. well done

[Inda]

Thanks, glad you liked it and reviewed.