Losing

In my head this is like a song.

Losing

 

Fragility,

reality;

screaming quietly.

 

Hurting,

loving

and longing.

 

You evolve,

I revolve

around you- my globe.

 

Love takes a fall,

as you leave, I crawl

 on my knees I  lose it all.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, too short, vague, etc.

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

not vague...these kind of poems are i guess intended to be a slightly vague...perfection in the use of words!

[Inda]

Thanks, means a lot!