Love Lives

Love Lives

 

Hope flows

once again.

A rose grows,

her lips ease my pain.

love lives,

takes less than she gives.

There’s a smile on my face

and the heart begins to race.

Reviews

[Inda]

How beautiful it is, when simplicity of a observation becomes so poignant, and romantic, this was sheer beauty my friend. I enjoyed it. Sometimes, real love is only giving, and have nothing in return...

- Elisa

[Inda]

Glad you enjoyed it and yes love can be one sided at times.

But remember the love you gave, is real love, and that makes you the most wonderful person :) x

[Inda]

thank you!
p.s: glad you're having a good night! :)

Finally some moments for me, and my friends.... :) you're most welcome x

[plainme]

really nice poem, good job! I really enjoy reading your work, it's short and carries a strong message with it. I'm sure more readers will agree with that fact.

[Inda]

thank you for your kind words, means a lot!