Home Run

Home Run

 

Run, run away,

If you don’t I’ll convince you to stay.

Don’t turn around,

even if my knees touch the ground.

 

Swung and missed, now you’re up to bat.

Steady as she goes,

follows

through.

She’s gone, what am I going to do?

Reviews

[quinfinn]

sounds to me like the bases were loaded and someone knocked the ball out of the park. oof! this never feels good when you're on the losing team....rematch! great write!

[Inda]

Thanks means a lot that you take the time. :)

[quinfinn]

always, my friend. all you need do is ask....